En la cuerda floja
Casi a punto de caer
En espera de un indicio
Que amerite el eterno anochecer
Un instinto me lo indica
Casi como una corazonada
Solo falta un poco mas de tiempo
Y la hora llegara como de la nada.
El recorrido no obstante es un delirio
De locuras, abismos de destinos
Encontrados en un simple respiro
De atormentadas brisas mezcladas de atardecer.
Sin embargo bien adentro está
El oscuro pasado, pronto a atacar
Como lobo oculto, dispuesto a esperar
Su presa, el presente, no puede escapar.
Un espectador omnisciente me siento
Sabiendo cual serán esos sufrimientos
Haciendo la vista a un lado
Intentando no ver tales presentimientos.
I wished I could speak Spanish :( Tried translating it, but I felt the essence of the poem simply got lost in translation.
ResponderEliminarHope you are well and in good spirit love. God bless :)
HUGS
)x( Bastiaan
Here's my best attept of translating it for you dear Bassie,
EliminarHope u can catch the essence I tryied to put in it.
And once again, thanks for reading me.
Muah!
Tiptoeing along a tightrope
Almost about to fall
Awaiting for sign
That merits the eternal dusk.
An instinct tells it to me
Just like a hunt
It only takes a little more time
And the hour will come, as out of nowhere.
The path, however, is a delirium
Of madness.. abysses of destinations
Encountered in a simple breath
Made of swirled breezes mixed with sunset.
But deep inside it remains
The obscure past, ready to strike
Like a hidden wolf, willing to wait.
It's prey, the present, unable to escape.
An omniscient spectator I feel
Knowing which would be those feelings
Turning the other cheek
Trying not to see such forebodings.
It sure is beautiful poetry and written well Maca. It's deep and it's multi layered. Good poetry does something to it's reader, in this case ... me. It moves me, and it moves me deeply actually.
ResponderEliminarI say BRAVO! to you my dear. Especially since you translated it in a tongue that's foreign to you.
Such talent :)
Thank you for finding the time in your hectic schedule to translate it for me. I considered it a gift.
*muah*
Wish I could hug you right now. Yeah I'd like that :)
HUGS
)x( Bastiaan
Ohh thank you very much my sweer friend.
ResponderEliminarI'm really glad you liked my poetry, and even more that you have felt it!
It means a lot to me, that u spend some of your time to read me!
Plenty of hugs Bass!!! ♥